Chapter 5: The Snake’s Game

He always played it cool, but I knew better. There were no coincidences with Quentin Ford.

I said irritably: "If you have something to say, say it. I’m in a bad mood—don’t mess with me."

I tossed the fishing gear on the ground, arms crossed, waiting for his next move.

Quentin didn’t reply, but took out his phone (gloved), showed me it was powered off, then, half-smiling, waded into the water until his head was submerged, and crawled out dripping wet.

He was making a show of it, making sure I wasn’t wired. The lengths he went to for secrecy were almost impressive.

I understood: he was worried about eavesdropping and wanted to make sure I wasn’t wired.

He trusted no one, not even me. I had to respect that.

If I were still captain, to lure a confession, I’d have jumped in without hesitation.

But now I couldn’t.

I was playing a different role—a disgraced cop with nothing left to lose. I had to stick to the script.

Because I was a disgraced, suspended captain. In this state, I wouldn’t follow a suspect’s instructions just to solve a case.

I pushed my sunglasses up and muttered: "Nutcase!"

I made sure he heard me, turning away just enough to show my irritation.

Then I stood up, brushed off my jeans, and turned to leave, not even taking the fishing gear.

One step.

Two steps.

Three steps…

My heart thudded in my chest. I kept my pace slow, hoping he’d call me back. Every step felt like a gamble.

As I walked away, my heart pounded, afraid Quentin wouldn’t call me back.

I counted each step, willing him to take the bait.

Ten steps… Fifteen…

Finally, I heard his voice: "If you don’t mind, I’ll still call you Captain Holloway. Since you’re here, why rush off?"

Relief washed over me, but I kept my expression neutral, just a hint of annoyance.

"Heh, I mind. I’m not a captain anymore, just call me by my name." I stopped and turned. "Quentin, what are you playing at?"

I kept my tone clipped, like a man who’d lost everything and was tired of games.

He stared at me for a while, then suddenly said: "Did you get plastic surgery? Why’s your face fatter?"

I took out a cigarette, lit it, and touched my swollen face: "Bad mood, too much smoking and drinking, eating at home all day. Of course I gained weight."

I exhaled smoke slowly, letting it drift between us. The lie came easy—years of practice.

"Really?" Quentin laughed, then shrugged. "Whatever. Let’s get to the point. Are you still interested in investigating Kyle Jensen’s death?"

His tone shifted, more serious now. I felt the temperature drop.

"You bet I am! Only a real jerk wouldn’t want to investigate!" I shouted, letting years of guilt fuel my anger. It was genuine, not feigned.

My voice echoed over the water. I let the rawness show—no need to fake this part.

After all, my guilt over Kyle ran deep. On this subject, I wasn’t afraid of Quentin seeing my true feelings.

He could see the pain in my eyes, the tremor in my hands. I didn’t care.

I stormed over and yelled: "But what can I do now? I’ve been suspended! Mark Henson, that snake, stabbed me in the back! These idiots can’t solve cases, but they’re experts at framing colleagues."

I let the frustration boil over, kicking the tackle box for effect. It felt good to let it out.

I cursed in front of Quentin, spitting with rage.

He listened quietly until I finished, then smiled: "Who says you can’t investigate if you’re not a cop?"

His calmness was infuriating. He always knew how to push my buttons.

I snapped: "What’s the point? Even if I find the truth, so many years have passed, and no one can pay for Kyle’s life."

The hopelessness in my voice was real. Sometimes the truth just isn’t enough.

Quentin laughed, loudly: "Must it be a court trial? When justice is delayed, when wrongs go unpunished, why can’t we be the judges ourselves?"

His words sent a chill down my spine. I’d heard that kind of logic before—from vigilantes, from people with nothing left to lose.

"You…" I gasped, recoiling. "You’re insane. That kind of thinking is dangerous."

I took a step back, letting my fear show. He needed to believe I was out of my depth.

He sneered: "Just tell me—do you want those who killed Kyle Jensen to pay with their lives?

"Nineteen years. Marissa raised her daughter alone—how hard was that? Even with your help, Lily suffered so much growing up fatherless, how much humiliation, how many classmates mocked her?

"And you—because of that shooting, your body was ruined, you’re still single, no family!

"But those who set you up? They live in luxury, retire with honors, bask in public praise. Aren’t you angry? Don’t tell me you never fantasized about killing them…"

His words cut deep, dredging up every old resentment I’d tried to bury.

Quentin’s words cut deep, peeling away my defenses.

He was right. I’d had those thoughts, even if I’d never acted on them. I clenched my fists, feeling the old rage surge.

Yes!

As a police officer, I can’t break the law.

But as a brother, a friend, a man—I hate them!

If not for them, Kyle wouldn’t have died!

If not for them, I wouldn’t be alone!

When I didn’t know the truth, I blamed myself for recklessness. But after hearing Quentin’s words—anger and resentment burned inside me.

I’m human, not a machine. Facing the inspection board’s grilling, I fantasized about running at least ten times.

There were nights I thought about packing a bag, disappearing, tracking down the ones responsible, and making them pay. But I never did. Fantasies, nothing more.

I imagined fleeing, tracking down those people, and killing them all.

But that was just fantasy!

Now…

Quentin’s words ripped open my wounds.

I panted, glaring: "What do you want!"

I could barely keep my voice steady. The urge to lash out was almost overwhelming.

"Nothing. Just want to help you." Quentin sat back, coldly: "Now I ask you one last time: do you want to avenge Kyle Jensen? Do you want to vent your anger?"

He leaned forward, eyes boring into mine. This was the real test.

Here comes the main point.

Before meeting Quentin, I had anticipated this: he would use Kyle’s death to manipulate me.

I’d run through this conversation a hundred times in my head, preparing for every angle.

Our conversation and my display of anger should have met his expectations, so he asked this.

If I pretended to be noble, it would seem fake.

So I said, decisively: "Of course I want to! But what can I do? Kill? I don’t have your perfect methods. If I kill them, I’ll be caught and drag Marissa and Lily down with me."

I let the frustration show, shoulders slumping. I wanted him to believe I was desperate, but not stupid.

Quentin smiled, leaned back, and said lazily: "There’s no such thing as a perfect crime—only a battle of wits. If you really want to avenge Kyle, I can help you."

He sounded almost bored, but I could see the excitement flickering behind his eyes.

"How? Help me kill them?" I asked.

He shook his head: "No, no. As I said, when justice is delayed, when grievances go unaddressed, a fair judge is needed."

He spread his hands, as if the solution was obvious.

"So you want to be the judge in the shadows?"

He sneered: "Why not us? A former criminal investigation captain and a high-IQ criminal—a perfect team."

He said it like a joke, but I knew he was serious. My stomach twisted.

When he said this, I knew—my undercover operation was more than halfway to success.

I kept my excitement buried, focusing on the next step.

But I didn’t want to seem too eager. I sat beside him and asked: "So what do you want me to do? I’ll say this: I may not be a cop now, but I’m not a cold-blooded killer. I won’t murder anyone."

I met his gaze, letting him see my hesitation. I wanted him to believe I still had a line I wouldn’t cross.

He stared at me for a long time, then sighed: "If the target is a complete scumbag, someone the law can’t touch, would you still refuse?"

His words hung in the air, daring me to answer.

I didn’t answer, unsure what test he’d give me next.

I kept my face blank, waiting for his move.

Quentin silently packed his fishing rod, then pulled a cloth bag from the gear and tossed it to me: "If you want my help, you have to earn my trust. Take this. Inside is your first target. Follow the instructions and I’ll help you—and avenge Kyle Jensen."

He stood, dusted off his hands, and walked away without looking back. I watched him go, the bag heavy in my lap.

With that, he left.

I didn’t open the bag immediately, but hurried home, contacted Leonard, and, on camera, opened the bag.

My hands shook as I undid the knot. Leonard’s face appeared on the encrypted line, tense and alert.

Inside—I was shocked—a modified drone, with sharpened metal wings, and a thick envelope.

Leonard’s eyes widened as I held up the drone. “That’s not standard issue,” he muttered.

Leonard said urgently: "Jim, I’ll send Henry to examine the drone. If it’s the murder weapon, we can arrest Quentin immediately. No need for undercover."

His eagerness was palpable, but I held up a hand.

"No! Don’t let Henry come." I stopped him. "Quentin isn’t stupid—he wouldn’t give me the weapon on the first test. The blades are sharp, not like a regular drone. Let me check the letter."

Leonard nodded, trusting my instincts. I tore open the envelope, heart pounding.

On camera, I opened the envelope.

Everything was printed. On top was a photo of a woman, about forty.

Her eyes were tired, her hair pulled back in a messy bun. Something about her face made my skin prickle.

Could this be Quentin’s next target?

I sent the photo to Leonard and read the letter.

Leonard’s fingers flew over the keyboard, running her through every database we had.

It was long, starting with the woman’s details: Felicia Grant, 40, former seafood shop owner, addicted to gambling, in debt. Her husband was crippled by loan sharks; her son dropped out of school; she abandoned them for her in-laws to care for, hiding from creditors.

The details were thorough—almost too thorough. Quentin had done his homework.

The letter said Felicia was hiding in an abandoned warehouse in the eastern suburbs. I was to spend two days practicing with the drone, then, from three miles away, use the drone’s iron wings to cut her neck artery.

The instructions were clinical, precise. I felt a chill crawl up my spine.

At the end: after I killed Felicia, that would be my initiation. Quentin would teach me all his perfect crime methods and tell me who was behind Kyle Jensen’s death.

He dangled the truth like a carrot, just out of reach.

After reading, Leonard slammed the table: "Arrogant! He wants to be a shadow judge—such arrogance must be punished!"

His anger matched my own. We’d never dealt with anyone like Quentin before.

"Arrest? With what evidence?" I threw down the letter, furious. "Damn you, Quentin. I thought you just wanted revenge, but you’re addicted to killing."

I paced the room, fists clenched. The realization stung.

Leonard pointed at the drone: "This is evidence! Enough to charge him with attempted murder!"

I scoffed: "If we can think of it, so can Quentin. There won’t be fingerprints, and you won’t find any purchase records."

I knew how thorough he was. He never left a trail.

I wasn’t trying to discourage us, but Quentin’s previous five cases were too perfect. Without a confession, I wouldn’t even know how he did it.

Every time we thought we had him, he slipped through our fingers.

"You could testify in court," Leonard said, then realized, dejected, "No, if we go to court, he’ll claim we entrapped him."

The legal minefield was real. One misstep, and he’d walk again.

I sighed: "Exactly. I’m officially suspended. If this goes to court, we have to explain the undercover operation. Without hard evidence, my testimony isn’t credible."

I slumped into a chair, the weight of it all pressing down. We were running out of options.

So, we both sighed.

The silence stretched, heavy with frustration.

Until dusk, Leonard asked: "What now? This is your test, your initiation. If you don’t kill, you can’t gain his trust. But you’re a cop—you can’t kill."

He looked at me, waiting for a plan. I took a deep breath, thinking it through.

I thought: "Here’s the plan. I’ll go, fly the drone. You move Felicia in advance, then announce a woman was killed in the eastern suburbs, and the city bureau is investigating."

Leonard frowned: "Faking death is fine, but what about Felicia? We can’t keep her forever. If we issue a death notice, her family will want to see the body."

I said: "She can’t be released yet. She owes gambling debts, so she’s probably committed other crimes. Interrogate her, detain her a while. As for the family, tell them someone wants to kill her and we’re protecting her. Let them hold a fake funeral to keep Quentin from catching on."

It was a long shot, but it was all we had.

"That works. I’ll arrange it."

Leonard was already on his phone, barking orders. We were back in the game.

Only two days left. I had to practice flying the drone, watch for Quentin’s surveillance, and make sure Leonard moved Felicia in time.

I spent hours on the rooftop, hands numb from the wind. Every time the drone buzzed by, I imagined what it could do in the wrong hands.

For two days, I practiced on the rooftop, hoping Quentin would contact me so I could collect evidence. But he was too cautious—he blacklisted all my numbers…

He was always one step ahead, watching from the shadows.

Two days later, I went to the spot Quentin designated, flew the drone toward the eastern suburbs. Through the real-time video, I saw Felicia at the warehouse door, scarf around her neck, hands behind her back, looking at the sky.

She looked nervous, but resolute. I took a deep breath and guided the drone in.

I aimed the drone straight at her. As it reached her neck, the drone flashed by, and she clutched her neck, face twisted in pain, blood spurting between her fingers, then she ran inside the warehouse…

My heart pounded as I watched her disappear. I hoped Leonard’s team was ready.

Afterward, I retrieved the drone and left immediately.

I kept my head down, moving quickly. I didn’t want to stick around in case Quentin was watching.

On the way back, I was relieved—Leonard had done a good job, even using props for Felicia.

He texted me a thumbs-up, letting me know she was safe. I finally exhaled.

Although there was a lot of blood, I knew it was fake.

The special effects were convincing, but I’d seen enough real wounds to know the difference.

Because yesterday, Leonard told me they’d contacted Felicia. To avoid Quentin’s surveillance, they hid a blood pack under her scarf. When the drone flew by, she broke the blood pack and ran inside.

It was a risky move, but it worked. I owed Leonard and his team a drink.

Unless Quentin checked the scene himself, he couldn’t know whether she was really dead.

I doubted he’d risk it. He was careful, but not reckless.

But there were patrol teams in the area. If someone reported it, police would arrive quickly. Would Quentin dare to go?

I hoped not. The last thing we needed was another body.

Everything went as planned: two hours after Felicia’s 'death,' the Maple Heights East City police and the investigation team responded, then informed the media a woman had been killed in the eastern suburbs.

The press picked up the story, running with the details we fed them. It was almost too easy.

Everything was seamless. Saving a life finally lifted the weight on my heart.

I allowed myself a small smile. For once, we were ahead of Quentin.

This was my first victory over Quentin—not only did I foil his murder, I saved Felicia.

It felt good—like I was finally making a dent in his armor.

Now, I just had to keep gathering evidence until I could bring him to justice!

I was more determined than ever. The finish line was in sight.

At nine that night, after watching the 'Maple Heights Update' news, I showered and went to bed. I believed Quentin wouldn’t contact me now. He would wait, making sure I had killed Felicia, making sure I had blood on my hands, before reaching out again.

I tried to relax, but my mind kept racing. I knew the next move was his.

Sure enough, the next week passed in silence.

The waiting was torture. I kept busy, but the tension never left.

Until a week after Felicia’s 'death,' Quentin finally reappeared.

I felt a surge of adrenaline, knowing the game was back on.

Same routine, as cunning as ever.

He never deviated from his patterns. It was both comforting and terrifying.

This time, he sent a small package via drone. Inside was a printed letter.

No fingerprints, no return address—just like before. He was nothing if not consistent.

The letter asked me to go fishing at the reservoir.

Back to the scene of the crime, so to speak. I grabbed my gear and headed out.

Reservoir.

The air was cooler this time, the sky overcast. I felt the weight of every step as I approached the dock.

When I met Quentin again, he was still in gloves and sun-protective clothing, eyes fixed on me, a strange smile on his lips.

His grin was unsettling, like a cat playing with a mouse.

That smile made my skin crawl. I couldn’t help but ask: "What are you laughing at?"

"Nothing, just thought of something funny." Quentin put away his smile, pointed to the fishing platform, and said, "Sit."

I sat, keeping my posture relaxed but alert. Every nerve was on edge.

After I sat, Quentin suddenly said: "Hand over the drone and your phone."

I calmly handed them over—this wasn’t the phone I used to contact Leonard.

He inspected both, then tossed my phone into the river with a casual flick of his wrist. The splash echoed across the water.

Quentin took the drone, stuffed it in the fishing bag, and threw my phone into the river without even looking at it.

I jumped up: "What are you doing!"

I made sure my outrage sounded real. Losing the phone was a small price to pay for his trust.

He waved: "Relax, it’s just a phone. I’ll buy you a new one! Let’s get to the point. Since you passed the last test, I want to tell you something important. To prevent you from recording, please take a swim in the river."

I rolled my eyes, but I knew he wouldn’t let up until I complied.

"Nutcase!" I spat.

But Quentin dragged me to the reservoir: "Didn’t Mark Henson frame you? What I’m about to say is related to his wife’s fall and Sharon Lee’s death. If you don’t get in the water, I can’t talk."

Hearing this, I was thrilled—I had finally gained his trust.

I tried to hide my excitement, splashing into the water and pretending to grumble.

But I still pretended to be reluctant. Under his urging, I waded in, splashed around, then came ashore and asked: "So, is Mark Henson’s wife’s death related to Sharon Lee’s?"

I wrapped a towel around my shoulders, shivering for effect.

Quentin said darkly: "Remember what I said to Mark Henson?"

I nodded: "You said he could find out Sharon Lee’s cause of death, and if he testified, he could reconstruct her death."

Quentin grinned: "Exactly. Because Sharon Lee’s death was a conspiracy between me and Mark Henson."

His words hit me like a punch to the gut. I tried to keep my shock under control.

"What?" I gasped, eyes wide. "You two really did it?"

I needed him to keep talking, to give me something I could use.

"Yeah!" Quentin admitted readily.

He said it like it was no big deal. My stomach twisted.

I pressed: "We checked your records. You never met Mark privately, and he never met Sharon. How could he help you kill?"

I needed to know how deep this rabbit hole went.

Quentin raised his right hand, tapped his fingers, and sneered: "Who says we have to meet privately? I communicated with Mark right in front of you."

The realization dawned slowly. I’d missed something obvious.

"Wait—at that time…"

I suddenly realized.

The code. The tapping. It all made sense now.

My guess was right: both Quentin and Mark had a habit of tapping the table. I was suspicious after Mark accused me. Now, hearing it from Quentin, I was sure.

He withdrew his hand and smiled: "Actually, my relationship with Mark goes deeper than you think. In 2011, after I attended his lecture, we met privately several times. There weren’t as many surveillance cameras then, and we weren’t persons of interest, so no one noticed."

He was always one step ahead, even back then.

"So you’ve been in contact all these years?" I asked.

Quentin smiled: "You checked my file. Remember when I was taken to the police station for excessive self-defense?"

"Yes."

I remembered: after Leon Young died, Chris Barnes investigated Quentin. In 2012, while working at an internet cafe, Quentin got into a fight, injured someone, and was detained for excessive self-defense.

Chris suspected that, in those days, excessive self-defense could be big or small. Ordinary people would go to jail. Maybe Quentin’s family pulled strings.

During my investigation, I suspected Mark Henson intervened in Quentin’s case.

By then, Mark was a criminal psychology lecturer with influence in the department.

Now Quentin explained everything.

But I didn’t understand why he was telling me all this. Was it because I "killed for him," so he treated me as an insider?

I tried to keep calm: "So Mark Henson’s wife’s death is related to Sharon Lee?"

Quentin waved: "Don’t rush. Listen."

He changed to a comfortable position and recounted: "At the end of 2011, after we met, we hit it off. In 2012, I nearly went to jail for excessive self-defense, and asked Mark for help. One call, and I was released. I was grateful. When I learned his wife cheated and tried to take his assets, I suggested using psychological tricks to stage a 'sleepwalking accident.'"

The coldness in his voice sent chills down my spine.

"Jeez… Mark really killed his wife?"

I was stunned.

Quentin nodded: "Yes. With my help, he staged the accident. So he owes me, and knows if I get in trouble, I’ll drag him down."

The web of blackmail and favors was more tangled than I’d imagined.

"So he helped you kill Sharon Lee?" My palms were sweating.

Quentin said: "Of course. I was detained in the division, couldn’t act, so I asked Mark for help. That day, we met for the first time, and I used our code to tell him: 'I hate the Lee family. If he doesn’t help me kill her, I’ll expose his wife’s death.'"

The pieces started falling into place. My mind raced with possibilities.

"No! Mark was with me those days—how could he commit the crime?" I protested.

I remembered, after Chris Barnes’ death, I stuck to Mark to prevent collusion. It was because of those days that he later reported me.

Quentin looked at me: "Why does he have to do it himself?"

I was stunned: "A third person? But after Chris died, Sharon Lee went mad, and we immediately moved her to a safe house, ensuring no contact."

Quentin laughed: "Yes. But are you sure she was moved immediately?"

"Wait…" I recalled: after her breakdown, she was sent to the psychiatric hospital for observation, then to the safe house.

Quentin seemed to read my mind and laughed: "You focused on me and Mark, but ignored someone crucial. Without that person, neither I, locked up, nor Mark, under your watch, could have done it."

"Who?" I asked.

"The insurance agent!" Quentin said mysteriously. "A former top student of Mark’s."

"Insurance agent?" I racked my brains—nothing.

"His name is Samuel Woods, an insurance agent in Maple Heights. In school, he used psychological tricks to harm a female classmate. Mark knew, but valued his talent. So when Mark asked, Samuel had no choice but to help, afraid his secrets would be exposed."

Quentin explained: "The Young family all bought insurance from Samuel’s company. When he was tasked with psychologically manipulating Sharon Lee, he pretended to discuss compensation and visited her in the hospital."

He glanced at me: "Maybe your subordinates thought an insurance agent was harmless and didn’t report it. But I have something important for you now."

Before I could ask, Quentin pulled out a box: "Samuel Woods is our biggest threat—he talks when drunk. So Mark and I agreed: to keep the Sharon Lee case perfect, we must eliminate him. Inside is a rattlesnake, starved for days, highly venomous! Samuel is in a nearby village negotiating compensation. Go, pretend to ask about insurance, hand him this."

He urged me: "You’re already one of us, with blood on your hands. If you don’t want to die by accident, hurry."

"I…"

I hesitated, feeling the snake moving inside.

While I hesitated, Quentin said coldly: "If you don’t want to avenge Kyle and yourself, you can refuse. I can make him die by accident myself."

Make Samuel Woods die by accident?

I panicked. If I waited, Quentin might kill him before I could stop him.

I’m a police officer. My duty is to protect life.

What to do? My phone was gone, I couldn’t contact Leonard. Even if I could, there wasn’t time to plan a fake death.

After much thought, I decided to go myself—not to kill, but to save.

A live snake is too unpredictable. It could escape when the box is opened…

Anyway, Quentin already believed I was a killer. Even if I failed, he’d have no reason not to trust me.

My plan: get through today, then contact Leonard, arrest Samuel Woods, interrogate him, and investigate his past and his meeting with Sharon Lee.

If Samuel confessed to manipulating Sharon, we could arrest Quentin and Mark.

I didn’t arrest them immediately because I suspected Quentin had a backup plan.

After several rounds with him, I knew how dangerous he was. Without solid evidence, arresting him might ruin everything, or get me killed.

So I said: "Fine, I’ll go."

"Heh, then hurry. I’ll watch Samuel. If you don’t act, I’ll use other means."

He left first.

Helpless, I took the box and drove to the address. Sure enough, I saw several farmers around an insurance agent in a cheap suit. Quentin’s car was nearby, signaling me.

I understood: he was threatening me—if I didn’t release the snake, he’d use the drone to kill someone. Whose, I didn’t know.

I parked, took the box, and walked toward Samuel.

But then, an accident—

As I got close, the farmers shouted: "Snake! Rattlesnake!"

At the same time, Samuel screamed.

Before I could react, the crowd scattered, my box was knocked over, and a small rattlesnake darted out—like a trained attack dog—and bit Samuel’s ankle.

I stepped back. There were two snakes on Samuel—one biting his right hand, one his right ankle.

What happened?

Why two snakes? I remembered only one in the box…

In that moment, my twenty years’ experience told me—I’d been set up!

Yes, this was Quentin’s plan!

Maybe he never intended to recruit me. Maybe everything he said was a lie. Maybe all along, he just wanted Samuel dead—and to die in front of me, so I’d be blamed as the killer!

Well played, Quentin. You saw through my plan, lured me in, and made me your accomplice!

Realizing this, I turned to Quentin’s car, catching his mocking gaze. Before I could chase him, he sped off, laughing.

I wanted to give chase, but behind me Samuel was rolling on the ground, screaming: "Help me… Help me…"

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